tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9878002.post110972481319033506..comments2024-03-29T01:01:11.212-05:00Comments on PERPETUAL FOLLY: Aleksandar HemonUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9878002.post-1109873551357900362005-03-03T13:12:00.000-05:002005-03-03T13:12:00.000-05:00It seems to be Dedo's story, doesn't it? Ultimatel...It seems to be Dedo's story, doesn't it? Ultimately. And so you're right, the narrator is "too much on the page." I have an e-mail relationship with his mentor at Northwestern, Reginald Gibbons. I should offer him these gratuitous criticisms, don't you think?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05886890881221225553noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9878002.post-1109872404960359562005-03-03T12:53:00.000-05:002005-03-03T12:53:00.000-05:00I read it. I thought it was a bit bizarre, to say ...I read it. I thought it was a bit bizarre, to say the least. I was also struck by the tangential narrator who is too much on the page. Either he should be there as the protagonist, or he should be a background narrator. As it reads, we don't really know whose story it is...Mary Akershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05190983234403757377noreply@blogger.com